Loved the design! I think the usability is smooth; I didn't have any problems creating the character. The only part I found a little odd was the color icon, but overall it's great!
The music reminded me a lot of some NES or SNES games.
On a more personal note, I think it would be nice if there were more curly/short hair and beard options hehe. But in general, I loved the character styles! Can't wait to see more of the project!
This looks really cute! I think my main feedback would be:
- More variety, especially with facial features, ability to have different expressions, plus some afro hair options
- The Details category should be in the Body section of the creator rather than clothes.
- The music feels strange and kind of puts me on edge a bit? But I'm not knowledgeable about music so I couldn't tell you why lol.
Colour stuff:
- Perhaps more of a medium colour for the character background (or the ability to change the background colour) as with darker hair or skin the character can get lost in the background a bit.
- All the skin colours look a bit oversaturated. I think maybe the bright pink shading on the lightest skin contributes to this because the shading colour clashes oddly with the more yellow/orange tone of the skin. Similarly on the middle skin colour, the bright pink/red shading stands out on the shadow under the chin as being the deepest, most saturated colour in the whole character and only looks cohesive if you have a character with pink hair and/or eyes.
- The shine highlight colour on the brown hair is way higher contrast than all the other hair colours. So bringing it more in line with the soft highlights on the other hair could be more cohesive (This is a very small nitpicky thing though)
I also thought about moving the details tab, but due to the size of things I changed it to the clothes tab to have better alignment. I'm thinking about changing the naming of the character to a new screen, this way I could make details fit and I could add some more things to the clothes part, like hair accessories and glasses.
I'm also going to work on contrast with background, a lot of people commented on it, I also believe it's an issue.
For the skin tones, i understand the pink tonality on shadows but that is part of my style, I prefer making skin tones more on the magenta side.
That highlight issue is real and I had not noticed it, great point.
Thanks so much for the feedback! Once I finish the gameplay base I'll work on the modifications!
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Loved the design! I think the usability is smooth; I didn't have any problems creating the character. The only part I found a little odd was the color icon, but overall it's great!
The music reminded me a lot of some NES or SNES games.
On a more personal note, I think it would be nice if there were more curly/short hair and beard options hehe. But in general, I loved the character styles! Can't wait to see more of the project!
Thank you!!! My husband also complained about the lack of more masculine traits and hair, I'll be adding more in the future kkkk
This looks really cute! I think my main feedback would be:
- More variety, especially with facial features, ability to have different expressions, plus some afro hair options
- The Details category should be in the Body section of the creator rather than clothes.
- The music feels strange and kind of puts me on edge a bit? But I'm not knowledgeable about music so I couldn't tell you why lol.
Colour stuff:
- Perhaps more of a medium colour for the character background (or the ability to change the background colour) as with darker hair or skin the character can get lost in the background a bit.
- All the skin colours look a bit oversaturated. I think maybe the bright pink shading on the lightest skin contributes to this because the shading colour clashes oddly with the more yellow/orange tone of the skin. Similarly on the middle skin colour, the bright pink/red shading stands out on the shadow under the chin as being the deepest, most saturated colour in the whole character and only looks cohesive if you have a character with pink hair and/or eyes.
- The shine highlight colour on the brown hair is way higher contrast than all the other hair colours. So bringing it more in line with the soft highlights on the other hair could be more cohesive (This is a very small nitpicky thing though)
Looking forward to seeing this develop!
I also thought about moving the details tab, but due to the size of things I changed it to the clothes tab to have better alignment. I'm thinking about changing the naming of the character to a new screen, this way I could make details fit and I could add some more things to the clothes part, like hair accessories and glasses.
I'm also going to work on contrast with background, a lot of people commented on it, I also believe it's an issue.
For the skin tones, i understand the pink tonality on shadows but that is part of my style, I prefer making skin tones more on the magenta side.
That highlight issue is real and I had not noticed it, great point.
Thanks so much for the feedback! Once I finish the gameplay base I'll work on the modifications!